incredibly moving, if (rightfully) heavy-handed piece of fiction. some of the best i’ve read on this site, period. interestingly enough, incensed zionist commenters have yet to reach this comment section – either they don’t read fiction, or worse, don’t know where exactly every state involved in the conflict stands within the bounds of this sci-fi text. many of the things i liked about this piece i love about the legendary work of writers like ursula le guin and octavia butler – if you were heavily inspired by them, it shows in a grinning sort of way. there’s some editing to still be done on this piece in my opinion (a lack of dialogue tags in crucial places convey chaos but significantly confuse the reader – plus some names of characters i took issue with…. but i digress) regardless, its core message, and the most obvious references to current events, are masterful. just barely scratches the surface of the vast disdain and anger of the rest of the world in terms of the u.s and the west’s conduct at large. wonderful piece. keep writing.
incredibly moving, if (rightfully) heavy-handed piece of fiction. some of the best i’ve read on this site, period. interestingly enough, incensed zionist commenters have yet to reach this comment section – either they don’t read fiction, or worse, don’t know where exactly every state involved in the conflict stands within the bounds of this sci-fi text. many of the things i liked about this piece i love about the legendary work of writers like ursula le guin and octavia butler – if you were heavily inspired by them, it shows in a grinning sort of way. there’s some editing to still be done on this piece in my opinion (a lack of dialogue tags in crucial places convey chaos but significantly confuse the reader – plus some names of characters i took issue with…. but i digress) regardless, its core message, and the most obvious references to current events, are masterful. just barely scratches the surface of the vast disdain and anger of the rest of the world in terms of the u.s and the west’s conduct at large. wonderful piece. keep writing.